First draft of second image

This second image, also, doesn't feel to be what I want. Although I really love heavy black lines, I don't think it works, for me, in this story, I guess, in my imagination, the feeling is ligher, less defined.

Anyway, the hands, are too small for the head. If I put one of my hands on my face, it covers half my face, both hands cover my whole face. These hands are out of proportion.

However, one must start somewhere, and here is where I've started. Starting, for me, at this point, is the important thing. I'll have to refine and learn as I go.